Writer's block.

[Cyc]

The bite sets in and the floor shakes.
... The floor shakes, shakes, shakes.
Like a shitty beginning for a lame poem, it shakes.
It shakes like a bad metaphor.
So here you are, wondering what happens after all this shaking.
Well, it shakes some more.
shakes
shakes
shaky shake shake.
It's kind of like when you're thinking of a creative word, and the best you can come up with is: tree, swingset, grass and leaf.
Meanwhile, you're sitting on a park bench.
An aquarium full of doubt... that shakes.

 

[C Divinity]

I like that last line alot
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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard--DJ Rap
"The integrity of a man's creative work is of greater importance than any charitable endeavor. Those of you who do not understand this are the men destroying the world"
"I'm not here to be served, but to serve"

 

[cherub]

kyk,, i dont' know if it was suppose to make me giggle and smile but it did,,, must be all that shaking... but i was a interest catcher that was for sure!!!
mwah!

 

[ice-9]

great duality!

 

[bTs]

i like shaking, so therefore i like this

//bTs

 

[Haza]

i know where your commin from with the shaking and writers block, i think...when i get it my hand shakes as if it knows the words but dont know how to write them, and its trying to remember
good work
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TV says donuts are high in fat, kazoo, found a hobo in my room, its princess leia, the yodel of life, give me my sweater back or ill play the guitar!
AIM: munkyrice

 

[ice-9]

shake

 

[spinkle]

man, that one hits like a seizure

 

[Hemlock]

...waiting for the inevitable (sp?) that never arrived:

Shake, Shake, Shake,
Shake, Shake, Shake,
Shake your booty....
Btw, I like your writing shaken, not stirred. Nice work.

 

[fizzygirl]

reading "shaky shake shake" made me smile for some unknown reason...it just sounds cute :D