Words

[PureEnlightment]

Right now I am sort of bored and I just want to write for writing sake. So this may be really good or it might not make any since at all or it could be terrible but anyways I want to write .
I am confused and perplexed.
Is there a light at the end of the tunnel?
How far must I walk to see the light?
Once I see it how much further will I
have to go?
The journey awaits me as I continue down
this spiral of tourment. How much further?
When does the light appear in the dark
bewildering gloomy tunnel. THERE IT IS
oh wait a sec that is only a illusion
another one made by my mind to make my
feet continue. To make my body and soul
walk the extra distance.
Once all of these steps are engraved into
the stone I walk, will they glow like
fire flys in the end? How much further?
Perhaps I am getting there slowly and all I
need is time. But how much time is left?
And how much time is needed? As always
I will walk through this dark and gloomy
tunnel until I reach the light of pure
enlightment. Once there I have suceeded.

 

[TekDancR]

Wow! what I got from that was a journey -- and maybe you don't realize that the journey is the "light" -- there is no real light at the "end" because when you are at the end you look back at all the great things you've done in your life -- changes (good or bad) things and people you've touched, places that only your eyes have seen.. and you are that bright light.
One word: No regrets.

 

[lilygirl]

beautiful. i love poetry that isn't structured or revised, just pure emotion or thought.
superb.
~lil
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"you will get this chance but once, don't let simple shit get you down"
therapy is expensive, poppin bubble wrap is cheap. you decide.
sn~ sparkleylily

 

[Noodle]

I see mind pictures.
Cool.

 

[E-girl]

success is everything.
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E-girl
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*Choice, not chance, determines destiny*
"November is all I know."