wondering....

[apocalyptic vendetta]

Wondering what its like to be you
I’m not real like you
I’m not true like you
wondering what its like to be me
in my mind I am set free
its all got the power inside
those cravings and urges you can not hide
try being someone else for a day
it’s not hard to just slip away
put on my mask
I’ll put on yours
hypothetically speaking of course
seeing in your mind things that are lost
I’ve emptied my soul at a heavy cost
wondering what its like to be free
inside you you’ll always have me
to see the truth and beauty is real
in the mind that has made me feel
I’m inside your head
its making you blind
these aren’t tricks I’m pulling
its just your mind.
see outside of your own reality
step outside of your techni-color dream
I don’t even know what I see
in this faded mentality
I don’t even know what its like to be me
wondering what its like to be you
I’m not real like you
I’m not true like you.
[ 27 March 2002: Message edited by: apocalyptic vendetta ]

 

[up all night]

Amazing as always. Your poems are worth the wait.

 

[KHsweety03]

:D
*thumbs up*
again with the gun... lol.. i love you.

 

[mmmmSeXyE]

^pow.
Sara this was absolutely beautiful. You have so much talent and heart in your writing. You are going to make me a book of your words someday, ya hear?
I love you sweetheart. I miss you!

 

[Angelight]

this was soooooooooooooooooooo good

 

[Sara Tonin]

I have to agree....very nice

 

[frostyangel]

that was a beautiful poem
I like how your writing lets us know that we not the only one's who want to be some else on a bad day!

 

[harraser]

I don’t even know what I see
in this faded mentality
I don’t even know what its like to be me
wondering what its like to be you
I’m not real like you
I’m not true like you.
It scares me how you can get into my head and then put down whats there in better words than I ever could. so many times Ive wanted to be someone else, usually when my life seems unfair, and how much Ive wanted someone to see what its like to be me, also usually when life seems unfair and i think i deserve sympathy (that little jab was directed at me not you by the way ). but best of all was those last two lines, im very familiar with feeling like I dont really exist, like Im just who I am for everone else.....argggghhh I dont know how to say what I want and I could go on quoting the whole damn thing!! Briliant work, as always!!!! oh and when you make mmmmSexyE that book could I have a copy too please?
[ 28 March 2002: Message edited by: harraser ]