~wondering thoughts~

[neverwas]

theres something about your smile
that makes my mind mischeviously wonder.

theres something about your touch
that makes my body linger.

your kisses that wake me in the middle of the night.
your gentle arms wrapped around me,
letting me know everythings all right.

i place a lot of emphasis
on love and dear friends.

what you do for me
none can comprehend.

long hot nights
heat built up by the sun.
we add to it our own body heat
as once again two become one.

memories are like treasures
their as valuable as my friends.
i dream of you
once again,
wrapped up in me
lyeing silently on your bed.

 

[Rollingrrl]

beautiful! just beautiful. great flow. wording. all that technical stuff is good and it just makes you feel, which is even better. great job sweetie!

~Shelly~

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Oh wow! I am in that place right now, brought back some serious memories for me. Another poem that climbed right inside my head!

 

[frostyangel]

Nice work woman!

 

[.dR spgeddi]

long hot nights
heat built up by the sun.
we add to it our own body heat
as once again two become one.

sexy.

 

[neverwas]

thanx guys

 

[up all night]

Your writing creates the most interesting stories in my imagination.

 

[Mean Girl]

what you do for me
none can comprehend.

Gotta love it (and your work sexy)

 

[neverwas]

Your writing creates the most interesting stories in my imagination.

imagination and being able to use it is a wonderful thing :D