with you in my dreams

[beanpoophead]

And if I push you away
im sorry

but it never hurt like that before
and I know I have to let you in

its just that im afraid
afraid of being broken again

like the beautiful china doll I was
pale skin, blonde hair, blue eyes
perfect portrait of perfection
dancing in everyone’s dreams

with a smile that couldn’t fade
and her eyes so blind
to all that was going on
and the reality she was soon to face

I want you to make me feel beautiful
like he never could at all
I know it can’t always be like this
can’t always make my heart beat

sometimes we have to slow down

but I don’t want your hands to escape

fall between the cracks I created
when you held my hand in yours

will you catch me each time I fall
each time I write your name on my arm
will you do what you did for her
for me, to make it appear to be ok

again this time

all I ask is that your there
when my tears begin to fall

don’t make them fall

don’t make them fall

no, I wont let you make them fall

cos if i never let you in
i cant help it, i wont feel the pain

that will come after you and i
tumble to the floor

somehow when i figure it all out
you still come out on top
and all the tears that may come
will be because of me and my big dreams

with you in them, always

 

[cherub]

Girl, i know most people would say,,,, give it a chance and let that someone in, but honestly, sometimes, waiting to be sure to guard your heart is the best bet, maybe for now as much as you been going through.

well written with alot of truth and honesty to this piece. Great stuff.

 

[RareForm]

I really liked the honesty of this one also.....great write girly.

 

[froggygirl]

like the beautiful china doll I was
pale skin, blonde hair, blue eyes
perfect portrait of perfection
dancing in everyone’s dreams

I think you wrote this for me.. hehe.. seriously.. everything in it is just me.. how I've felt... beautiful peice... nice work