Winter Ache

[Sara Tonin]

The ice falls
on my deeply frozen
heart
gasping,
aching for
warmth
my secret
it's humming
heart drumming
can you hear it?
come closer...listen
put your ear
to my
cold
body
lying dormant
tempting you
taunting you
to touch
tap lightly
and break the
cold crust
I'll bleed
passion and
lust
wake me with
a kiss
awaken my
bliss
come to me
come to me
come
[ 17 February 2003: Message edited by: Sara Tonin ]

 

[ice-9]

numbfully soothing...i like!

 

[Dagny]

That's just damned sexy, girl.
I love the cadence of it, the aching of it (although I'd always rather you were smiling). Beautiful.

 

[Sara Tonin]

Thank you
I've had a very difficult time writing lately.