window

[dpc2424]

window

buried on a street corner
i witnessed the rise of solemn gods
who clenched their fists
the same fists that were bred to lay haste
to good intentions
yet
i've seen these same fists
weld the broken pieces back together

buried in a hollow oak
i witnessed an ominous rebirth
in between the clamor of huddling mobs
there buzzed the innocence of a passerby
i saw the outsider
and i felt the infliction of thoughts and acts
yet
i've seen these same mobs
gather in forgiveness of ignorance

buried in the place that i called home
i witnessed the intentions
and i saw what was meant to be
now
what came from nothing
finally grows it’s roots

 

[cherub]

interesting peice of work !!!! i liked it though !!

 

[vurtomatic]

i like it... feels like it could've been a longer piece.