WhY dOeS tHIz wOrlD mAKE nO SEnsE?!?

[rm-rf]

The whirlwinds around me dissapate
As the familiar surrounds me
Almost too late
The wold to which all things relate
The basis of my ego, my emotions
Love and Hate
Convincing me that it is real
Although along my journey
Reality was revealed
I saw beyond what was once surreal
Into the depths of my mind
But it is hollow I now feel
These animated machines I see
Through pain and hate
Define their reality
One of them Ill never be
But in avoiding that
Could be the end of me
Try it on my mind
I wont, sympathize
Feel your voice scream
I wont, be calling!
Defend my beliefs? I ask myself
But what if defending my beliefs
Ment departing from everyone else?
Perhaps I am victim of the same hell...
And these ideas are ment for the bookshelf...

 

[frostyangel]

Defend my beliefs? I ask myself
But what if defending my beliefs
Ment departing from everyone else?
Perhaps I am victim of the same hell...
And these ideas are ment for the bookshelf...
I love the way you ended this!!
I found your mind to be captivating!!

 

[harraser]

Defend my beliefs? I ask myself
But what if defending my beliefs
Ment departing from everyone else?
theres no need to defend your beleifs, what other people think of them is there buisness and is of absolutely no importance to you. Ive gone a ways toward departing from everyone else, due to my personal beleifs....its not really so bad, you learn to relly on yourself and not be dissapointed when other people are cruel or dont come through*shrugs* you can only do what feels right...
you do have an impressive mind, your poems make me think

 

[rm-rf]

....its not really so bad, you learn to relly on yourself and not be dissapointed when other people are cruel or dont come through*shrugs* you can only do what feels right...
precicely the point in that last stanza/paragraph whatever

you do have an impressive mind, your poems make me think
tell that to the folks in the Spirituallity and Personal Philosophy forum! hah! thanks

 

[harraser]

hahaha Ive noticed what youre talking about..... people can be like taht when they have too high an oppinion of themselves and unfortuanantly a lot of the people in there are a little too convinced of their own briliance simply coz they know all the terms for the things theyre talking about and some of us non philosophy students dont.lol Im gonna get myself in trouble with that statement ahh well you cant let people like that get to you.