Who am I haunting?

[realm]

Where was i lost?
Peaking mazes
Endless phrases
Chopped like coke lines
Attic mirrors found my future
Dust and tablecloths
Dead ornaments dumbfounded
Where have you been all my life?
Depression settled in
It's not a house guest
More like a despicable visitor
Craned thoughts of structure
Built with sandbags and humor
Grey was my emotionless daunting
Who am I haunting?


I wrote this depressed last night trying to rid myself of writers block. I read an amazing book shortly after and I must say I feel rejuvenated. Still I like this piece for it's simplicity and ability to evoke my emotions. I love to write....

 

[-Guido-]

Yo bro that shit is deep. Wow. Guido fucking likes.

"Craned thoughts of structure
Built with sandbags and humor"

 

[realm]

thanks man!

i feel retarded right now i just posted this in the wrong place lol....

 

[guineaPig]

is this like the "win randycaver's heart with poetry" thread?
because that was awesome.

 

[realm]

no and thank you lol

fuck here comes the ass raping i can feel it hahahahah....move this shit before i get annihilated

 

[guineaPig]

its way too early in the morning for a proper assraping.
actually...i dont even know why the fuck i'm awake.
or how in the world i'm not hungover...

 

[UnSquare]

Word

Realm,
your writin'
is,
as always,
touchin',
yet untouchable...

...I felt the white drapes
across the furniture...

PEACE
UnS

 

[realm]

^^damn you either? im still trying to figure that out myself...im just damn glad i dont have class today. im thinking of stopping by the library for some brain food. i need some mental stimulation i was on a bad one last night..depression settled in and i warded that shit off like the plague. fuck that!

thank you very much UnSquare

 

[UnSquare]

Mornin'? Mornin'!

its way too early in the morning for a proper assraping.
actually...i dont even know why the fuck i'm awake.
or how in the world i'm not hungover...

Gift From God...

%)

 

[guineaPig]

i know right? thats two day in a row!

 

[UnSquare]

You Jus' Help'd Some Depression Settle Out... Ex-Pression....

fuck that!

Mos' Def.

thank you very much UnSquare

The day I get thank'ed
fo' thankin' on
MAD STYLES
is a good day.

An' you have one too.

You're a fuckin' brilliant writer.

PEACE
UnS

 

[realm]

<---speechless. thanks alot man.

no joke you guys made my day.

ill stop being all sentimental now lol.

 

[GenericMind]

This thread reeks of ghey.

 

[_a_A_C_c_]

----> words.

fyi, if you were really worried you could have deleted the lounge thread and reposted here!

 

[realm]

Oh i thought i couldnt delete a thread only posts inside the thread. my bad!

 

[New]

That's pretty smooth.

 

[Raz]

I like how this feels like it's spit out, but the ideas are very deep-reaching....creates a sort of subterranean tension.