~~When it Rains~~

[cherub]

When it rains think of me
touching your face, in a moment lost in eachother's eyes
souls connecting like we had done for years.
Timeless moments that we remember
that I am not sure can ever be made again.

When it rains think of me
Sunday Mornings, reading the newspaper together,discussing world events with our coffee's in hand, still in bed.
Saturday nights laying on the livingroom floor, lights down low, playing music and discussions of World War II, giggling at such the silliest things.

When it rains think of me, and how you try to mold me, you try to make me stronger, of who I was becoming and who I am still being.

Am I everything you thought I would be, or am I stronger then you ever thought I could be?

If so when it rains think of me

 

[FixXxer]

props to this line
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Am I everything you thought I would be, or am I stronger then you ever thought I could be?
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sounds liek you are doing alot of reflecting, i hope things are all ok with you BL mom

a really good peice, a rarely get a chance to see much of your work.. but im very glad i got this chance

 

[RareForm]

rare is a good word. but when she posts they're always so touching. i have no definitive idea, but i think i know who this is about.. beautiful emotional imagery from a beautiful person.

loveu.

 

[Mehm]

nice and simple, beautiful

 

[DeirdreScott]

very beautiful but also very sad

 

[skyalf]

nice one, cin! Totally got into the flow of this one.. these 3 long lines threw me off the first time.. so i had to read it again.. and then once more this line "when it rains, think of me" really stirred up a lot of emotions in me. Great stuffs! well, as its about that season, I wish you best of luck and all the jolly joy you could ever want for X-mas and all the way through the coming year, brand new and shiny merry christmas


gene

 

[yakksoho]

magnificent

 

[realm]

I really liked this alot, i felt what you were saying throughout the entire thing.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

beautifully sad, hope to catch up with you soon!

 

[Angelight]

I love reading something you have written, especially if i don't know what exactly is going on at the time. I think of you often and i truly love getting a peak into your life.

Miss you.