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when i drink i wanna write

damon1872

damon1872

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seems when i drink i wanna write. though my performance when i do isnt always the greatest. i just wanna fuckin write when im drunk. so huuuur. its right thuur under this


my thoughts are always logic
though they stay in the clouds
when i murder a rhyme
im sicker then loose valves
known to sip on sumpin
and show you how to be stuntin
grip the microphone
and get the party jumpin
so you can call me
imperial, cause i shred this material
junglist bass junkie
eatin up knowledge likes its cereal
you could say im kinda coo coo
and my screws need tightened
but im quick with the knife
eagles eye, be quick like lighting
is it frighting?
well cuddle up dear
i'll teach you all about fear
teach you how to shoot
and disappear when its clear
i got a clean getaway
and the plans fool proof
besides you know i got you
and your mans bulletproof
jump in the phone booth
come out like clark kent
and my mind gets lifted
when the blunt sparks, bent
is my mindstate
while taxes go up with the crime rate
goin to jail for life?
no risk im a take
you must be fake
or could you be fiction
the world is falling down soon
is my prediction?
ya dig? ~damoN~
 
and here is some more rambling

when i grip a mic
be sure you'll see nonsense
brain dead lyrics i be kickin'
hittin hard make you unconsices
i've lost my mind
just like i always lose time
go ahead and do crime
that shit comes back in due time
new rhyme, new topic
i'll show you how your boi drops it
you cant stop it
im pushing buttons, sending rockets
to your area, wait am i scaring ya
straight to the ICU , is where they carry ya
i bring bad vibes to wreck lives
take preppy boi's out dey neck ties
im not stupid i got memory
turntables and direct drives
what are you fuckin crazy
im off the heezy baby
chillin in columbus
with a gurl i like to call my lady
they call me shady, but im not slim
louisville slugger bats i got them
like tounges in light sockets
believe me man, i shock them
and leave em twitching
with they body missing
no more everyday life
no more mother kissing
no more late night talks
just white chalk
so get on that plank bitch
i can push you, or you can walk
i can teach you bout the game
how louisville white boi's be stuntin
or u can do it on your own
but kid i can show u sumpin'
see im a midwest junglist
and basically we run this
and if your not feelin me
im a add you to "whats to become list"
and that is no longer existing
and my point if you missed it
ill leave you on a star wishing
my lyrics are impossible
like tom cruise im on a missoin
the point of the matter is
i die harder then bruce willis
and the last man standing
holla at cha boi, you gotta feel this

~damoN~


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my.jungle.like.whoa ask a bitch, tell a hoe
 
even though i'm not into 'rap' or whatever this is called, I LOVED this piece, the rhythm and the beat is just right and the vocabulary you used is perfect.

I just love the line 'when i grip a mic', just that line, what great stuff.

Keep em coming because you have some great stuff in you.
 
short for the morning

alright fuck a mic
just picture me on stage
tossing gasoline out
just me and my lighter and my rage
they cant hold me in a cage
what good is it to be in jail
when im trapped on this earth
everyday is a living hell
keep looking for the 7th sign
cause times are getting wild
theres millions of me running around
all of them a poster child
for hate and violence
my most deadly sound is silence
if you wanna find me at a party
ill be the one sippin' 40's and the loudest
cause we known to get buck
run around screaming "JUNGLE WHUT"
and im an eight leaf clover
that means, double the luck
and its damon the cacusion (duh spelling??)
known to get your heart racing
when i come to your city
every mother better start pacing
you can call this rap
thug poetry or whatever
but holla at cha boi
cause u know i be hella clever
pull the lever, flip the switch
sorry but lifes a bitch
i dont like people who are fake
or those people that tend to snitch
i serve em like burger king
and you can have it your way
if anyone is reading this
tell me how is your day?

~damoN~


damn dog ate my belt.....again...damn pants wont stop falling now...and she ate a new pair of gurls pants...diedogdie
 
and another one

waking up this morning
i just hit post reply
fire up a black
and think of how u supposed to die
but really there's no choice
we all go in the end
im just glad i got my gurl
and im grateful for the time we spend
together, cause i need her more then ever
im not goin away for a long time
better yet make that forever
top of the morning to ya
and how ya doing lad
its that boi with the red hair
so why you look so sad
cheer up, put your beer up
and give me a toast
im finally happy for once
like life living by the coast
welcome to my mind
thanks for checking out the thread
your on a one way trip
to my cerebeal cortex in my head (spellin)
and ill leave you more then high
ill leave u cross eyed and infulenced
but i dont have to tell you
cause you know how we do dis
like strangled victims
i tend to leave my competetion breatless
and most of my life
has been drama, and living reckless
and im a leathal injection
my dose ld-50
im just an everyday junglist
come on, sing it with me

8o ~damoN~ 8o
 
Cool man, keep it up, I like your rhymes
but reading between your lines is hard sometimes
try staying on the subject more and make it clear
but that comes with experience so never fear

Just keep up the good job and keep dropping
I got a suggestion, try picking a different topic
I know MCs like to talk about self-elevation
but that shit gets played all day by radio stations

Try writing a piece about the following things
like life, mind, universe or even politics
I'm gonna finish here, there ain't much point to this
just trying to make a suggestion to fellow lyricist
 
damon, your style has improved since our "candy kid" days. hahaha....
your writing shows it.
i liked the third one best.
and to the person that commented on "when i grab the mic" i don't mean to reductionize the line but here's a piece from dre:
"when i grab the mic, i flick my toungue like a dike"
just made me think of that....
also, whire rabbit: that shit was awesome. seems you may have some rhyming skills yourself?

~Pix
 
like whut

~every corner i turn around
seems another sucker shot
heiny bottle to the face
is almost what that sucker got
enough about rent-a-thugs
cause its me, and im a showstopper
i do this on a daily basis
living for drama like a soap opera
i break em so proper
but like the blind they cant see it
so just open up your ears
and maybe you might believe it
dont matter cause ill achieve it
all my life i havent needed help
i just take a look at my hand
double up, and play the cards im dealt
quick with percesion
and like a razor minds sharp
even with the flip switched
ill be shining in the dark
like a candle lit room
steadily awaiting your doom
beauty is wonderful thing
like buterflies outta cacoons
if i could i wouldnt fly
even if i should i wouldnt hide
and even after my last breath
i still cant seem to die
maybe my mind moves in circles
proubly a figure eight
my reflection in the mirror
a kodak moment, picture perfect, great

blah blizzle

!
 
half this shits wack i know

toss me a mic
thats already on fire
count down, 10 seconds left
till your life expire
you need to retire
get outta the game
a money hungry bitch
is what i get outta your name
so move bitch,
and get out the way
or sit back and relax
let me tell you bout my day
if i do recall
i meant to talk bout sumpin'
nah fuck it my heads spun
no need for that stuntin'
i just wanna see ya'll jumpin'
sweating fuckin bullets
and your heart pumpin'
if you havent heard of me
im bad for your health
im livin in poverty while you livin in wealth
i guess thats how the cards delt
but before you let your heart melt
im in your mix like twix
with bud that sticks like the carmel
in the center
i been in it since 98
im no beginner
natural born killer
poly drug abusing fucking sinner
but your bois a fucking winner
number one contender
greatest like ali
like leaves in the winter
you bitches be falling
head over heels
your mouth over pills
young david , save it
and see how will power feels
oh, i guess you dont eat power meals
you just waitin on the next sour deal
trying to make your profits
play no games, so you better stop it
take the gak the and cock it
thats weak shit,
take the bullet out the chamber
i use a bat to put your life in danger
not your typical stranger, mind rearranger
bound to leave your head blown
with brain dead lyrics
doing more damage then the whole damn ozone
whos home?
nobody execpt me
kick that ass like jet li
leave that ass regreting
oh is you sweating
well throw in the towel
and while im at it
id like to buy a vowel
if you could only buy a smile
reading this might be worth your while
even though im kinda senile
picture hell on earth
thats what i see now
and thats todays daily forecast
supply some feedback
or it might be your ass =D
wow your fast
im sittin here slow
mind kinda twisted
hittin this kentucky dro
trying to remember
what the fuck i came here fo
doesnt matter
cause this is all irrevelant
tell digweed im more then heavenscent
im hella bent
taking more tranqulizers, then an elephant
maybe its too much
or maybe i just say these things
to try to make you blush
reading my mind
is like hittin 2 bottles of rush
with n2 oxide, on the side
how much does it take for a raver to die
you better savor the lie
if you thinkin the scene not crashing
where da fuck are the junglist at
is what im asking,
you not passing go
my jungle like whoa
disagree, your opinions like assholes
and everybodys got em
what happened to that kandy kid
somebody must a shot em
nah im just playing
get me on the mic, and i be rhyme slaying
now what you saying,
plur and peace
thats like trying to get me in a fur and fleece
its not falling thru
lead me outta this life
im following you
so lead me into the light
and say goodnight
time to go to sleep
put comments in the box
and leave your message at the beeeeeep...



this goes smoothly with that what happened to that boy beat, i was listening to it for a portion of this lil piece right cher. one day ill be better, so check out my thread when its on page 666 ...im sure shit will be right by then. if not, go out and get drunk for me...no chaser. heh. right. holla at cha boi ~damoN~


my.jungle.like.whoa
in case you didnt know
 
too early to be too great

hello my name is damon
and i think i have a jungle addiction
and if a lineup lacks da bass
lineup wont be shit, my prediction
but who am i to talk
to bitch about kids sittin where i walk
i guess its better then them lying
better yet dying, outlined in chalk
i escape thru my music
and im thankful for my drums
glad it doesnt take a pill
to make life disappear and become numb
im not one to bitch
so hearing these things might be suprising
like thinking about your life again
just as the sun is rising
ive been there and back
but i live with no regrets
and i got my share of enemy's
but really its no sweat
especially to someone like me
who has no worries
im just doin my damn thang
not living life in a hurry
basically im just sittin here
thinkin bout get my mind lifted
and thinkin bout murdering sum shit
on the mic, cause im gifted
im up in columbus now
like 3 hours away from home
but its only when im there
that i actually feel really alone
i finally met someone
to call my significant other
my baby, my sweetheart
my friend, and my lover
so im feeling like a million bucks
sittin here with a jaded smile
if you know me, and dont like my attitude
u gonna hate it now
but please dont be a bitch
sit back and finish that haterade
cause im a be even worse
when you see me on a later day :p


~damoN~


its fuckin early. night.
 
something i dug up

i dug this up. right after i met my gurl. i wrote this. i was rather, sedated, you could say. but that dont matter :P

a time to come down, a time to relax...a time to forget about bullshit..and start thinking
about the facts... life isnt easy, not by far so dont think it...and just cause you got a bottle.
doesnt mean u always have to drink it...the thoughts i speak are logic..without a doubt you
gotta feel me...and if your thinkin bout scrapping...this is no rappin, you gotta kill me...cause
i come back like cats with bats and seven lives...im thinkin bout quittin...no im bullshitin'..
i lie...whats truth..whats false...we all pay the ultimate cost ...comes down to the end...
no win ...u take the loss...the loss of a life...that really had no purpose...you were hated on
the earth...now your hated more beneath the surface...worms crawling..death, decay... sorry
but you see no day...you wouldnt be in this box...if you would have had it my way..oh
great, wait, there i go again with the violence... what happened to love, happiness, and
peaceful silence... man i threw it out the window... i was crunk and smokin indo...i dont know
where this tempers from..but i guess i gotta thank the kin folk...i need to change my wayz.
but really name someone who doesnt...they said i was a demon child..i told em fuck em and i
wasnt...my reputatoin, sometimes shy but please dont tempt me...im a beat you with this bat
as soon as them shells empty...keep cockin and reloading...makin shots expoldin.. im slick
like james bond..so my bullets come out golden..wha my holding..half a brick and about
a couplekeys..2 blunts a qualeaude, and around 7 g's...but you know im day dreaming...im
broke and cant get a bitch... im alright most the time...but make me happy...god i wish... its just
something i can never have..and something that wont change...unless that something or
someone, is like me, a bit derranged...a lil silly, crazy. and someone who dont give a fuck .
i could date a 4 leaf clover..and i still wouldnt have no luck...oh goodness gracious...good
golly molly ... our meeting was short..but show support girl and call me ... my minds a lil
twisted...and sometimes i think im a creep ... i dont know if its the typing...or just all this
lack of sleep...either way whats up..for you this wasnt first intended...but who gives a fuck..ill
choose own my way to end it...system shutdown...attention red alert...this girl is on fire,
when she hugged me my clothes burnt...man my mind gone..i think ive lost it...if i had a single
brain cell..to the side ive done tossed it..so excuse me miss..if i said sumthing rude...missed
the party, but damn sure couldnt miss you...thanks for comin..and im glad we got to meet,
i hope we kick it again soon....next time ill have a treat ;) shhh no questions...just keep them
lips sealed... drums, bass, and bitches, i eat up all three like a meal


8o 8( 8o
 
MY THREAD! MINE! who cares about replies, im eatin this shit up like popcorn shrimp. more to come soon ;) enjoy if there is one bluelighter that bored :P if not..ill con sum greenlighters into reading, there so easily peer pressured. haha jk. holla at cha boi ~damoN~
 
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