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What You Don't Know

i just read this for about the third time, i am not really sure i can even reply to it yet. Its just is so very powerful, and everytime i read it i feel it more. Its an excellent piece, but at the same time i am sorry for whatever made you have to write it. Be strong sweetie.
love
angela
 
Once again, Icee with a timely bump. Just what I wanted to see.
Ashke - this is just amazing. Beautiful, sad... I don't have all the words to describe how it feels to read your words. Thank you.
 
i dont know how to respond w/ the right words.... so im just gunna say beautiful work comes from beautiful people. this piece left my jaw on the floor & tears in my eyes.
 
Oh WOW. I can't believe this is the first time I've seen this. Wow.
God it reminds me of myself like a year ago.
So incredible well written and poignant.
Thank you
*~Sugar~*
 
ok..this piece hit me hard...........once you have a man you know you Can train, to take care of you, and you push it away out of tempatation to feel good, then what does he have, other that an apology for something he doesnt really understand? or maybe he is a fuckin dumb ass and you cant get through his thick ass skull..maybe he doesnt want the knowledge, or maybe he already knows the knowledge, and wishes to forget it and begin within you.. whatever it is, dont give so much creditbiltiy because every female is different and wants every silent micro touch in a hundred different ways,. ok? and maybe this doesnt even apply to wha you wrote.. im just weritin what i think as a lost lover who gets dropped every time i touch big toe to big toe the wrong way.. Do U feel me? i dont want to try to argue or challenge your wordss, becaue i feel them very powerfully..almost as if i wish i had a different sn.... but i dont so i wont be afraid to see what happens by me..just educate me on what the hell it is i am suppost to do as a lover, other than perform every thing flawlessly.. because no man is perfect, yet, figure if you really gotta man or not,,not tryin to diss on anything, this is just writin becasue i know exactly what you meant, but it lost me so much at the same time.. :)
 
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