What I meant...

[wanderer21]

When I told you I had feelings
What I meant was I love you.
When I told you I don't open up much
What I meant was I've only exposed myself to you.
When I told you I was afraid of you
What I meant was I didn't want to feel the way I do.

When I told you I understood your reasoning
What I meant was I don't accept it.
When I told you that joke we both laughed over
What I meant was I am hiding my pain.
When I told you good luck
What I meant was please don't forget about me.

 

[Dekloren]

Girls and their crazy ways...

 

[cherub]

^^^ maybe true but alot of times,, this is so true,,,
part of life i guess.

great stuff alot of truth and honesty in this piece !

 

[wanderer21]

Girls and their crazy ways...

No I agree with you...we are crazy! No doubt...that's exactly what I was trying to capture. (but so are boys!!)

A lot of girls, including myself, have an extreme tendency to not tell the guy we are with how we are feeling until we know 100% what they are thinking...A lot of times it backfires.

Thanks for the imput Cherub!!

 

[Dekloren]

You can never be 100% sure to know what is in someone else's head

 

[wanderer21]

^What the heck does that mean? {at a loss}

 

[Dekloren]

A lot of girls, including myself, have an extreme tendency to not tell the guy we are with how we are feeling until we know 100% what they are thinking...A lot of times it backfires.

You can never be 100% sure of what someone else is thinking

 

[wanderer21]

^Duh--Sorry I'm an idiot...

 

[Dekloren]

It's all good...

Just another blonde moment

 

[ArmyDansGirl]

I like it. I felt that piece.

 

[neverwas]

When I told you I had feelings
What I meant was I love you.
When I told you I don't open up much
What I meant was I've only exposed myself to you.
When I told you I was afraid of you
What I meant was I didn't want to feel the way I do.

When I told you I understood your reasoning
What I meant was I don't accept it.
When I told you that joke we both laughed over
What I meant was I am hiding my pain.
When I told you good luck
What I meant was please don't forget about me.

this was beautiful. short and simple. its amazing how certain things n your life repeat thmselves and then someonewrites bout it and it seems so clear all of a sudden.

excellent work.



nice avatar btw

 

[froggygirl]

A lot of girls, including myself, have an extreme tendency to not tell the guy we are with how we are feeling until we know 100% what they are thinking...A lot of times it backfires.

It does seem to backfire most of the time.. but it was a nice peice of poetry. I liked it. made sense to me!

 

[frostyangel]

I feel as if I'm always answering like this trying to sound strong but on the inside I'm screaming out ...

I like this and I don't usually read short reads. Keep up the good work..

 

[RareForm]

i liked this alot..written very well...

 

[mariacallas]

i love it.