What have I become?

[kazza_baby]

What have I become?

I count by the seconds, the gentle trickling of time turned into agitated fits of sadness.
Each second hums louder as time amasses into curled fists.
Reply span, call time, durations, durations, durations
that I must endure.

Raised eyebrows to a bitten bottom lip;
tossing, turning, hitting the wall.
This time gap is a prison cell and only you hold the bail.

The humming turns to whirring as I fall -
beneath the pressure of these prolonged seconds.
What have I become?
I crawl with time and I am selfish.

I await communication.
I await your hands of time.

Tell me, what have I become?​

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Each second hums louder as time amasses into curled fists.​

^I love this line. The imagery is superb. Great emotions being conveyed in this hon, I really enjoyed it.

Hope you're OK. /Hugs.

 

[(Wordy)]

Yeah, I agree, that is a superb line!

 

[cherub]

we change constantly i learn and sometimes we may not like what we are at times but time is funny we can always change it... it is up to us....

I think this is great and powerful,,, insightfulness is a great key