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what could've been...

5FACES

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Okay so this is my try at a faster form of poetry.. it's not completely done yet but i felt like posting it anyways....
To go back to that day and tell you my soul,
would be to burden myself to eternal misery.
Is it just easier to live
with eternal agony?..
Of the unknown.
Would you still be lying, trying, frying
your brains,
weighed down with chains
of mistake after mistake,
running out of luck,
trying to get a fuck,
C"MON baby boo what's up?
What if a right came out our wrong?
You could be tryin to make a difference
in the interest
of maintainingself-dignity,
sustaining your life,
living, fulfilling your needs and mine.
it could've been our relationship containing
truth, respect, love uncondional,
monumental as we go through the years.
Tears come to my eyes.
Boo it could'ev been you and I
like Romeo and Juliet,
Bonnie and Clyde,
together in time until we died.
But no we both went on with our lives,
our feelings we denied.
Back to our lovers,
But now are we both emotionally satisfied?
Just going through the days while they last.
Onlywanting to see other cast,
our look og dreams into our souls.
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...
 
sweet
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i liked that alot...it sounds like it could be a song, get with someone that plays the guitar and come up with a rythm thatd work really nice
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