Weakness

[Strawberry_lovemuffin]

Weakness

Who I am, and who I am with you…
No longer bear any resemblence

A hurt here, a silence there and it pierces me
I am soft
Where has my shell gone?

Like a half-deflated balloon I have no form
I want to stand up

Be proud
But there’s no air left

Who am I?… amnesia, inertia
I react with false bravado you see through
And it’s all an act

You know it
And you know
With one bat of your tear-stained eyes
You have me again.

Since when did I hand you the right
To break my heart?

To take my air…?

 

[bluegirl]

WOW!

Who I am, and who I am with you…
No longer bear any resemblence

i LOVE this line- i can so relate.... very lovely piece indeed....
bk

 

[frostyangel]

nice piece..

 

[Mariposa]

Beautiful, just like you.

I look forward to hearing that things are better for you. I can't think of anyone more deserving of happiness and peace.

 

[neverwas]

Who am I?… amnesia, inertia
I react with false bravado you see through
And it’s all an act

You know it
And you know
With one bat of your tear-stained eyes
You have me again.

Since when did I hand you the right
To break my heart?

To take my air…?

lovely peice hun...*hugs*...coz i can relate to it ever so well,i understand it so much.

 

[Angelight]

very very heartfelt.

thank you.

 

[PsychoKitten]

(((SLM)))

beautiful, i so can relate

 

[plazma]

*very nice*

Nice work, very nice work. I'd write more but I'm in a hellish hurry.

-plaz out-

 

[star_beats]

beautiful

 

[~xtc-angel~]

really really beautiful...this summed up so well the way I have felt the past year and a half...its nice to know that it isn't only me...things will get better..

 

[mr_fluffy]

how odd, and yet how true. too often we change for the other, hardly realizing. sometimes for the better, sometimes...

why?

**huuuuuugs**