Watching an old man die in a dead America

[K'dOUTinAZ]

My theme is drastically different than yours
Suggesting this, my dream must be different than yours
I'm no love poet
I'm not one to follow grain
Too many clutching to words of meaningless
I speak of the down fall
The $5.99 a minute sex phone call
Those whom died and chalked
The rapist pardoned and walked
This system is falling apart
Alcoholic beverages
Tearing familes apart
Everybody please calm down
Another mutilated body has been found
The number is now eight
Closed casket funeral
No sympathy, she was a drug addicted prostitute
As a child she was just so cute
Cute enough, daddy couldn't resist toughing her
Age six sucking daddies dick
Something is making me sick
But who cares, she was just a drug addicted prostitute
When we roll the dice
We always walk thin ice
Nobody is safe
Paranoia blares from the media
I numb myself, I'm not really here
While America lives in fear
What about our children?
Attempting suicide
Just so they can be noticed
Our parents just hide
Anything to ignore our problems
Its the doctors prescription
Give them a pill and they'll shut up
Quit whinning
You better "Say no to Drugs"
They destroy dreams
Did we ever have dreams to lose?
So why refuse?
When an escape from reality is so easy
In form of powder or plant, liquid or pill
They don't want us living so easy
So the lock us up
No fun for you
No fun for you
When I'm done with you
You'll want to kill yourself
When I'm done with you
You'll want to kill someone else
Another terrifying event for the media to blare
But we have the children to blame
Their addicted to drugs
They sell their bodies
They are destroying their dreams
So goodbye
I'm no love poet
I'm a realist

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

this is by far- one of thee best things i have ever read in here.
pat yourself on the back for this one.

there is so many things in this forum that is going unnoticed lately... i'm glad i didn't pass this up.

it has been a long time since i started to quote one line, that lead to the next line, that lead to the next line... that eventually ended up me quoting the whole entire piece.

this whole entire piece is "quote-able".

i love the flow of this, from topic to topic.

excellent job!!

 

[Dekloren]

Yeah..
His style is fucked up in it's own way but I love it.

He is definately a realist.

There's so much shit in this world that no one knows about or they just tun it away.
I love how you tell it.

 

[up all night]

Powerful writing and very fucking true.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

In your face realism - Much respect!

 

[paradoxcycle]

K'd, this is really good. Thanks for sharing.

 

[onetwothreefour]

fucking brilliant work. potent words man.

 

[i_enjoy_ecstasy]

great work! the way you used your words is what i enjoyed! very nice!

 

[froggygirl]

Wow.. that was truely amazing... So full of power and emotion... You're a wonderful writer

 

[monkeyjunky]

very, very, very good. the internal and regular rhyme is excellent- you must have either worked extremely hard on this, or done it completely subconciously - you could write a paper on this

 

[drEaMtiMe*@#]

great work. well observed. and well written.