want

[DJLA]

it's also in my journal...

i want you so bad...
i keep hearing these words, they escape from my lips to his ears...
they snake from his breath into my skin which replies with chills and longing...

hearts race.
nails claw
and
dig
into flesh not nearly responsive enough
to the gasps and groans and sighs and mumbles
that
stumble
through sweet, moist, freshly kissed,
sucked,
pulled,
licked
lips.

faces, legs, arms and chests
glisten
and
heave
in time with a beat that neither can hear
only can feel between the weight of their bodies
pressing
rubbing
rocking
against and inside eachother until...

a moan
a sigh
a growl
a squeal
a groan
and they explode into furious warfare.
lips, tounges, teeth everywhere.

and then there is silence.
feet intertwine, legs inseperable,
fingertips on back tracing lines that aren't there,
nosetips running along facelines,
lips too tired to kiss,
eyes too heavy to open,
bodies too joined to move.

then there is sleep.

 

[DJLA]

bump- hoping for some feedback

 

[Reverend_Lust]

this reminds me of my ex and I, Loved her so much, still do.

end paragraph shows exactly how I used to feel. Very nice work

 

[katmeow]

Very hot!!

You described exactly what I'm missing most

(I missed this first time round... so much stuff getting posted here these days it's easy for good work to slip past the first page quickly!!)

 

[neverwas]

and then there is silence.

there is nothing i like more than just cuddling after a hot passionate sex romp

ur words in this were so intense u gave me tingles. nice work hun

 

[DJLA]

thanks.