Walking Away

[Taliana]

Seeing you happy
pierces my heart
as your laughter resonates
through my veins just as
this angry music keeps pumping out.

All things that were once great,
have deceased to exist.
Why do i always come out at the bottom
of this endless emotional pit.

A new set of circumstances
A new set of friends
yet with the same grand fucking finale
and what a grandeur conclusion.

How am i meant to let another friend

slip.....

away....

By walking away.

Leaving me in the gutter, where we both were when we met.

I helped you up, drenched you in support
and look at me now, bitch.
Battered and bruised, lying in the gutter of pain, again.

Not even, a shoulder to cry on,
My tears don't exist.

My heart is frozen in time.

Waiting...
Awaiting this same circumstance, to recycle itself.

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What lesson have i learnt this time???
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[jnr_spgeddi]

never lose a friend by loving them.

 

[plazma]

Damn. This poem crawls with bitter cynicism and sadness. Definately one of your more powerful pieces Tali.

A new set of circumstances
A new set of friends
yet with the same grand fucking finale
and what a grandeur conclusion.

I love that stanza, it's so beautifully put.

-plaz out-

 

[blahblahblah]

have deceased to exist

I like this line. A purposed play on words...?

 

[Vaile*]

This piece moves me M...
Haven't read something that saddens me this much in a while.

Hope you're doin' ok. *hugs*
- R

 

[Taliana]

jnr- your comment really touched me... ive since made up with this said person and things will hopefully be on the mend.

plaz- certainly does, everyone has their days of bitterness and cynicism, but im really glad i wrote this piece and got it out. part of a healing process.

blahblah- purposed play on words, or just random thoughts coming out of my head. generally i dont sit and ponder too long when im writing something, i say what im thinking at the time and generally it may seem as though it is planned out, when in actual fact, its just my abstract brain trying to put words together. ehhe

and mr v: im doing ok now thanx, a few people commented i should follow my heart and instincts, and i did, and things are on the mend.

 

[Frosty da snowman]

^^^ powerfull. I hope you and your friend work things out.