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walkin' away

beanpoophead

beanpoophead

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A time will come
when this all gets old again
and maybe you’ll still welcome me home
cos i got sick of being bold
I won’t be the same, no never the same

you called me just today
said it wouldn’t be the same, without me
I could barely say what i had to say
and i was just too afraid
that i would make something not bad

hands lifted to the sky
praising a God of wonderment
while im on the floor, passing it by
with a nod, i give it all away
and im back to where i was before

you told me i could change the world
with just one confession of myself
but you know i would, i tried
and nothing came of it
And your right, I don’t know anymore

i tried the goodbye a hundred times
and it never did a thing
cos i always passed it by
the real truth, the one you bid for in me
and i just keep walkin’ away
 
THIS PIECE RIGHT HERE-
describes so much,
that I feel...
and would like to say in your words also,
to E-girl
that says so much,
we all feel.

This was absolutely wonderful.

This was word for word,
what I know-
ALOT of us can relate to.

Thanks.

and i also have to add that you used the SAME title, that someone had used,
to write something very emotional to me, many many months ago,
that I, in return, finally had the inspiration to write to *them* tonight.
I think it's ironic,
that i wrote it first,
then read this.

This really, really touched me.

oh oh, and *edit* again......
I want to NOMINATE this as the PIECE OF THE WEEK.
 
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wow thanks!

i wrote it right after i got off the phone with a guy from my old church kinda thing. i had a mini emotional breakdown and that poem was EXACTLY what came out.
 
beanpoophead said:
i tried the goodbye a hundred times
and it never did a thing
cos i always passed it by
the real truth, the one you bid for in me
and i just keep walkin’ away
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I have been here, this is a painful part of any relationship. Touched my heart. Very nice
 
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