Wake Me

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I remember freer days
Lost in the world only known today
Reality was a step away
Rocked by my discordant reverie

Swallowing structures designed to stream
A wondrous aspect of many dreams
That feeling that I have this steam
I can't escape from me now

Vibrating frustration streaks
As my new found torture peaks
The vibrancy I had once leaks
A manic invasion breaks out

Stuck in the mind that now imprisons
Now I need some kind of fission
To renew my earthly mission
A spark of something unknown

A life that rhymes is out of my mind
In a free verse now most unkind
Just lines that suggest what was behind
Nothing is real but pain now!

 

[stonerfromohio]

You have an inquistive deep pondering mind, and an ability to write... sad to see some of your writing delving into darkness... ive been there with drugs and without drugs and its misery to feel nothing but pain... one pointed concentration on a religous object you revere will do wonders to stop mental pain and craving. Sounds a bit like a lame suggestion but im telling you if you can just keep your attention on an object 15 to 20 minutes in the morning and at night for a week or two your mental feeling will feel strong, concentrated, transparent, and clear.

 

[lostNfound]

That's painful dude. Well written, but painful.
Get outside and breathe some fresh air, it's the best you can do when your mind entraps you in a mental dark room. You need to let the light in man.
Get some endorphins working, get out in that Florida sunshine.

 

[Mehm]

What a decent. This makes me sad. Things are looking up bro, big hug