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Vein Gravy [comment plz]

sc4t

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Frantic screams heard throughout the block.

Kicking and punching, pleading too.

"O God no, please no."

"What, what's wrong Deb?"

The chaotic crying stops. But only for a moment.

The dopesick remedy, the universal mystery.

"The gun, the magnum, Bob, it's in the bottom cabinet", Debbie whispers.

Quiet, heart broken sobs are heard from beneath the door's tiny aged crack. "David, please don't do this! Please Dave, just listen to me, we'll get you h-help."

"Please Dave, open the door. Do it for mommy."

Bang.

A blunt, blood curdling shot was fired.

16 year old David Heller was pronounced death at the scene.

Autopsy reports show signs of prolonged heroin abuse.

David is dead.

The dopesick remedy is once again buried six feet under.

Vein gravy.
 
It's reminds me of an intro to a show like Law & Order.

Really really don't understand the vein gravy...
 
The language really rushed itself through, like it really happened in 3 seconds. I almost felt the shock of not wanting to be sure what happened.

Enjoyable.:)
 
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