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Dakeva

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I gaze up and speculate where this path leads.
Then a fleeting look back at all I have been.
Tides of change leave me whirling then grasping.
As they wash away the remnants of my complacency

No more repetitive rhetoric, and no more noble lies.
These deceitful dealings that we exercise to preserve identity,
Only paint a more dazzling, more splendid facade
Sustained ever so loosely by the base of our insecurities

Lashing out in dignified ignorance
We meticulously raise vast, soaring walls,
Searching for meager pieces of solace and serenity
To silence the voices that tarnish the days.

Yet are we in truth keeping anything out?
Or merely casting ourselves ever deeper to the depths?
The comfort of anonymity is complemented by alienation
And when you stand unaccompanied how do you endure...

And when walking among the masses how can you conceal
All those unspoken words and unharvest emotions.
The yearning desires, the ever-present apathy and me.
The inconsequential echoing voice that never suffices

To proud to be bold, to nervous to be valiant
This yielding path leads only back to complacency
Grow a bit more distant; lose another shade of our luster
Were righteous intentions ever enough?
 
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Just when I wanna hate you...you demonstrate just one of the many good qualities that lie within you.
Brilliant work man.
 
dave what can i say?
brilliant
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Mela
 
That was true GREATNESS....
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If it's orange and fuzzy, it's FoXy....
"Ed Meese should be ass-fucked by an acid-crazed elk."-Dr. Hunter S. Thompson
The study of science is the study of the anatomy of God...spirituality is the psychology....
 
The comfort of anonymity is complemented by alienation
...fucking brilliant.
i always look forward to your work dakeva.
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nice job.
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
"...there are 2 paths, you can go back, but in the long run... there's still time to change the road you're on..."
 
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AIM: MoondancerKat
"i wish that they'd swoop down in a country lane
late at night when I'm driving
take me on board their beautiful ship
show me the world as I'd love to see it"~ Radiohead, Subterranian Homesick Alien
 
this poem really struck me.
thank you.
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can you see through it all? can you see... me?
 
**sigh**
The absence of brilliance leaves me feeling void of something... and then I remember things like this, and I am comforted somehow.
 
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