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[FutureAeons]

I see you
Standing there
Arms reached out
Waiting on your moment of rapture
In these fields of gold
The glimmer in your eyes is astounding
As the sun simmers you with rays of hope
Filling your soul with joy
And the highest release
As you let go of all the past negativity
All the past prejudices
That conformed you to be one of them
Embrace your new hope darling
Bask in it
Let that which is within shine bright
For today is your new day
Your new calling awaits
Tell us with a powerful voice
How your day shall begin
And how it shall end
For you are the one that can free your mind

 

[ice-9]

you present the reader with some great mental imagery.
i like.

 

[*LittlePrincess*]

/me hugs FA....Im with ice-9, i like too

 

[yakksoho]

This was fantastic. I always enjoy your work a great deal. You had brewed such powerful images in your words. It left me with a lot to think about.

 

[E-girl]

you make me mush inside. what a lucky lucky girl you write about.