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[Deleted member 10878]

i burnt my lips on your kiss
poison.. i guess..
i should have taken it as a warning..
as a sign...
but i didn't listen.
i follow you like a puppet..
you carry me by strings
that are bullet proof.
now that i'm stuck..
you're delighted
with your skill and poise.
i'm happy for you..
i'd shot gods for you..
you're only a dream.
you're of my imagination..
i dream day in and day out..
rotting my mind.
poison.. i guess..
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"Love is like crying like writing like dying you've got to do it alone." ~Nicole Blackman
[This message has been edited by StarTripper (edited 24 November 2001).]

 

[Web]

Dammit Star, your on a roll this week.
Really groovy. I see, hear, smell and feel this one... I've been in that predicament a time or two, knowing the same thing,... and yet I kept going, just like you did. Hell, I'll probably do it again too...

 

[Sara Tonin]

Good stuff, Star

 

[bTs]

wow. very nice.
//bTs

 

[alykitty]

i follow you like a puppet..
you carry me by strings

I know exactly how this feels..you can only take that for so long, girl, it really starts to get old after awhile...
Nice work