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[Mockery]

Drifting
Entering my time, my world
Sharing a feeling before it fades
Wringing out all we can, hanging it on a hook
It blows away
Lost forever?
So it seems
The wind stirs, carries it back
Floating
Like a feather
More gently than before
Much more calm
With less intensity
Humbled
Saddened
It lands in my hand and rests

 

[alykitty]

Wringing out all we can, hanging it on a hook
It blows away
Lost forever?
So it seems

Very, very nicely written!!!

 

[Mockery]

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