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[Rhiannon]

I cried today.
Such simple words...they brought me to tears.
Life's a bitch. It's sad.
Life's a bitch.
But swallow it down, and keep pretending.
Nothing really matters.
It's only pain...
What is pain?
What are emotions?
So pointless.
So, so pointless.
Why don't I make it easier on myself and become cold?
I only care what people think if it changes me,
So that's not an impact.
Fear? Maybe.
Apathy? Most likely.
I hate my mother.
I think I'll kill her.
Well, not really.
Too afraid of getting caught.
Damn emotions.
I cried today.
Did I tell you that?
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[litTle RaVer bOy LoVEs X]

I love your words...i just read three of your works and i must say you are good and i can tell it all comes from a place inside...
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"i cried today, did i tell you that"
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Awesome......

 

[Rhiannon]

Thank you very much. I am deeply appreciating all the feedback I've been getting. Little Raver Boy Loves X, do you write poetry?
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[Mellabopper]

good work
but i will direct you to the guidelines:
guidelines
and especially this part of them:

this guideline was made by cherub a while ago - when you post new threads - please limit it to about three (3) new threads at a time (within the span of a few days, also)... no one wants to open up the first page of the Words forum and have it all be poems by one person. lets share our space with others

its not that i dont appreciate you posting in this forum, because i totally do and i think its great that you are willing to share your work with us - but i will ask to spread out your posting over the course of about a week or so if you have that many pieces that you want to post in this forum.
keep up the great work!
thanks,
Mellabopper
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rock on.
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[*SWeeT-e*]

Y'know this struck a nerve. I love being numb...and I hate it. I miss my emotions, as much as they condemn me at times. But if I start to cry, I'm afraid I won't stop for years. You erase the pain, but you erase your chance for happiness too. In destroying our emotions, we destroy ourselves and our own humanity.
~Kim.

 

[seyton]

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[Demissio]

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