Untitled LSD-Inspired Poem

[-KT-]

Cascading down,
around, and spin,
to win again;
I've found boxes
full of boxes
full of infinity,
a trinity
in symmetry?
(Fractally)
An end of starts
may start an end.
An affinity for spirals, fires
trend, I spend my
time in space and
then, my space and time
unwind,
evade,
cascade.

 

[jameslovesyou]

i really like the rhythm and rhyme scheme...i love asymmetry.
i send you smiles.

 

[(Wordy)]

I've found boxes
full of boxes

This sums up an important part of the psychedelic experience for me: the realisation of how arbitary language can be in the way it fractures and compartmentalises the world. The slippage of the signifier, etc...

 

[cornollio]

very acidic! hehe i loved it

i do shit like this when im on acid



one time i was REALLY fucked up,and i thought i was writing the most intense poem of my life, when i read it the next day it said this

"YOU ARE IN A THOUGHT LOOP" over and over and over...really flipped me out

 

[katmeow]

Reads like acid

Nice capture.

 

[lil angel15]

I've found boxes
full of boxes
full of infinity.

That has so much meaning to me it's scary to read it

Great work!

 

[not_broken_420]

I love it! It's so fun to read because it has great rhythm.

 

[New]

I've felt like that on DXM before...until I found my own box of reality.

 

[colicolo]

great write