untitled......love without sap

[Meatpuppet]

just now leaving home
And entering the central nervous system
Waiting for a juggernaut….a monolith
Of love so great it’s grotesque
To deprive me of mediocrisy and hum-drumness
Of masturbation and self-loathing
Encompass me and I’ll swallow you whole
Found the apple of all my sin
My mouth wide open when I shake the tree
Waiting for you to fall and sit with me
My taste buds alert at the tyranny of your taste
Loving your passion and all my exaggerations
Makes me wonder why I suppressed early signs of infection
Love until we are so tangled
We cannot escape
So undefined and well designed
The only thing that adds color to my black mood
Exterminate those insects of depression
The expansion of pain of dissonance forms a beauty of sorts
When focused and captured shines like a bruise on God
Awareness of the side effects of all these thoughts
Finding there’s no cure
The re-birth to all, kills all in my head
An old me, a new me, you love
Woven into my soul, stitched up in thread

 

[E-girl]

very nice choice of words throughout.

Love until we are so tangled
We cannot escape
So undefined and well designed
i really liked this part. nice imagery.

 

[up all night]

I love this. I had to read it slowly and roll the words around in my head....
I think the whole thing is stunning.