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[sparkle_jez]

Everything that I felt,
Was never let out.

I shut myself away from the world,
Because I didn’t trust it anymore,
It was just a scary place,
I’d rather try to ignore.


I pushed everything so deep inside,
And I hid it all away,
That I even managed to convince myself,
That everything was okay

I lost myself,
In an apathetic daze,
But I told myself,
That it was just a phase

But I can no longer deny,
That things are fine,
When cuts are made on my arm,
And the blood is tears that cry.

 

[Rollingrrl]

awesome! and while not everyone can understand the ending and how it feels to be at that point. i do and I think you did a damn good job of representing it!

~Shelly~

 

[neverwas]

I pushed everything so deep inside,
And I hid it all away,
That I even managed to convince myself,
That everything was okay

I lost myself,
In an apathetic daze,
But I told myself,
That it was just a phase

But I can no longer deny,
That things are fine,
When cuts are made on my arm,
And the blood is tears that cry.

hun this was so beautiful. i always bottle things up and always push emotions back down and say 'i will deal with em later' but sometimes i forget and they come back to haunt me

i understand the whole cutting urself thing (as i have been through this personally) a lot of people wouldnt understand it...some may even find it offensive or scarey...but it was perfectly suited to the emotions of this peice.

~kel~

 

[Taliana]

Wow... very very good piece, all rounded in together.

Our situations do seem very damn similar... so bizarre. Keep on expressing yourself in writing. We like it!