untimely vanilla

[Dakeva]

Misconstrued silence.
That’s not apathy you found bridging the beats of anesthetized hearts.
For apathy knows not the labors of love
And you know naught of my labors to persevere

I relinquish blame
So surrender unrequited repertoires.
So surrender unreciprocated reverberation
So surrender unresponsive etiquettes

Revel in novel commonplace
Dance between distinct ranks of flames and frost
Present enough to sense alluring splendor
Fleeting enough to deny an errant temptation

Untimely vanilla.
A quintessential blueprint...
For monotonous love affairs.
Delivered on the next business day before 10:00am

Caveat emptor
And lip service with a smile.
I admire your assembly line rhetoric
Insincerity with an artist’s flare

So permit me to clarify this misconstrued silence.
Brought forth not by apathy...
Rather by a bitter taste left upon my lips
By a spoiled vanilla parcel
Lingering perhaps...
A day later then it should.


In days past...
I had held a conviction
Love ought have the courage to die furiously atop a grand center stage. Not creep silently out a back door...

 

[Sweetpea]

^
|
what he said (beautifully I might add)
yo dave-I got yo chocolate right heah'

 

[Shuddr2Think]

wow. this was...awesome...

I admire your assembly line rhetoric
Insincerity with an artist’s flare
damn. very excellent.

 

[Flower]

...just...wow.
WOW.

 

[PixieGirl]

Dave, I cannot reply with some cheesy words that will not convey what wish, so instead I miss you my friend, see you soon.

 

[femmme fatal]

very eloquent dave...
your words always strike me in a queer fashion... i dunno how to explain it... leaves me feeling uneasy... ?
aj the femme

 

[E-girl]

beautiful. your words always touch me.

 

[Dagny]

Duality, you say?
I do so love the way you express yourself. You have a capacity to make me feel like I've seen god and the devil, side-by-side, every time you write. Lovely.

 

[IredesentHopes]

I found this to be absolutely amazing.
Brilliance & simplicity together.

 

[Sinthetik]

the description ya'll are looking for:
dave is ghetto fabulous.
(plus it's so obvious that this poem is dave's tricky way of talking about how he's waiting for his kilo of coke to come in through the mail)

 

[liquidocean]

diggy-damn!

 

[Dakeva]

Jeff you always were the only one who really understood me.

 

[Angelight]

awesome my dear

 

[justagirl]

Amazing work again dear.

 

[E-girl]

 

[ThreeStandsOdd]

My first time reading your work-- I like it a lot, I don't really know what to say. Highly appreciated.

 

[Dagny]

How I miss you....

 

[Nietzche]

Dance between distinct ranks of flames and frost
Duality he most certainly does say! Bravo Dave! I feel terrible I missed this on the first time around.
whoa . . .
[ 11 October 2002: Message edited by: Nietzche ]

 

[L O V E L I F E]

Dakeva is a great writer and Sinthetik is mad funny.
Sup homeys.

 

[Jabberwocky]

Damn, I love reading great talent.

SG