unreplaced

[spinkle]

unreplaced

with the lies
standing in for lines
the leaving one and the left behind

built to argue
definitions of grace
and the meaning of unreplaced

jealousy
a need to satisfy
it's satisfaction
you can't deny

like the smile
you force pretend
not entertained
by the end

it's the secret
hidden in caress
a revelation when you undress

it's an attraction
you seem surprised
it was always due to happen in time

the threads are thin
a separated seam
the disappointment
the drop in esteem

see through smiles
pretty false pretend
not blind distracted
by the end

with the lies
standing in for lines
the leaving one and the left behind

built to argue
definitions of grace
and the meaning of unreplaced

spinkle 2003/2005

 

[bisKi]

I like it, and even more when it has been put to music

 

[cherub]

glad to see some of your work here excellent as always,,,,,, music ???? i bet it is good !

 

[RareForm]

yes, i was expecting this to be good. lucky for you! :D

nicely worded, and nice rhythm.

 

[spinkle]

http://spinkle.ingenuitous.com/unreplaced_021105_processed.mp3

^^^ rough draft if you care to check out the song. i recorded it ghetto stylee cause of a soundcard problem...just me, an acoustic guitar, and a microphone. gives a good idea what i'm after, tho.

 

[RareForm]

I loved it :D seriously. that's quite similar to the style of my acoustic band. i thought your vocals were splendid.

 

[spinkle]

thanks =) i'm excited to get out and debut this live. makes me really really want a band though...

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Awesome song and I loved your vocals. Very Nice!