Unite to Divide: Dimension Attention/Dimentia Tension

[StatuS tickleS]

I'll break, the ice told me
You'll lead the way, hold me
We'll traverse tonight only
WHile these wings of thorns flutter tragically

Connecting aggressively, our ids are coercing
Directly ineffectively, desperate and disturbing

Interspersing with the earths surface
Un-nerving person-to-person purpose
Reversing the suturing of incisions, discerning to usurp us
Turning a futuristic vision into a present tense that has cursed us

A metaphysical endocrinologist endorsed supporting this
His forensic decision insisted on metamorphasis
But born from relentless encystment we are torn from this
The discord and friction caused by the initial abhorrence is informative

More and more, the mystery of this continuum
Could only be a perfect storm forming concurrently
From the core of intensity, morphing through fission
To the sworn propensity to immensely and rigidly resist autocracy.

 

[Mehm]

awesome rhyming and very abstract

 

[(Wordy)]

^ What he said...

Full marks for keeping rhythm within each stanza... the variations work, a little like jazz improv.

 

[Jabberwocky]

^^^ agreed. I loved the tention between your words. It felt uncomfortable for me to read as if the words were waring with themselves, but overall a stimulating and rewarding experience. your very talented.