two, three, four; sans one

[vurtomatic]

two wine glasses
of double happiness
stand together,
before a pool,
of crystal still
three vassals
together stood,
atop clouds of swirl
floating, in a sky of red.
white ground passes
four words: a start
pen joined, your touch
mine my mind
white paper scribbles
three of double
three empty
one untouched.

 

[goodnitestar]

beautiful rythm , aww i love wine, haha, just finsished of a bottle myself.

 

[WordyOne]

Another superb piece of work, vurt...

Nice play with numbers, but I have no idea what it's supposed to be about...
(injoke)

 

[plazma]

Well, vurt you're just proving yourself to be a master yet again, of pared down verse.
Congratufuckinglations on a very very VERY nice poem.
-plaz out-

 

[nephil]

great work!

 

[Angelight]

really nice work
Although i need to be a mod-nazi

4) HOW OFTEN CAN I POST?
In order to accommodate the many “poets” in our forum, please limit yourself to 3 posts on the first page. No one wants to open the forum and see one person’s name dominating the front page. Share the spotlight with others. We understand that from time to time, old posts get bumped up and it may put you over that limit, and we WILL take this into consideration. But 3 posts on the first page is from hereon our max, and if you violate this, your excess posts will be moved to the Deleted Messages forum and you will be sent an email asking you to repost it once you are below 3.
thank you, drive through

 

[vurtomatic]

ack... sorry i just cant resist putting them up when the words keep coming.
[edit: oh shit... sorry, i didnt realise i have five threads in here ]
[ 15 December 2002: Message edited by: vurtomatic ]