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two short poems - (anti-drug poems)

drug_wench

drug_wench

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DEAR DRUGS
I asked for courage
I asked for strength
Instead you took from me
All I had left
I asked for wisdom
I asked to be sane
Instead you stabbed holes
In my fragile brain
I asked for a buzz
Then I asked for a rest
Instead you made my soul
Angry and stressed
I asked you for something
Just something small
And what did you give me?
You just took it all!

METH PSYCHOSIS
Voices shriek and heads spin round
I claw the walls but hear no sound
It's like I see the world of spirits
But my body's not quite with it
Pain and evil's all I see
In the mirror - that's not me!
Monsters hide under the bed
Monsters hide within my head
From the depths of my depair
I cry out - 'Lord, I know You hear!
Take away those black-cloaked men!'
It will go - I'm not sure when
Probably when my brain's not smothered
Dopamine aint yet recovered
I miss my thoughts - I miss my life
I never should have fucked with ice
It's never too late to stop that game
Drop the pipe, be sane again
I must remember I chose this
Only the crazed choose psychosis
 
I loved the Dear Drugs one
And I think it would rock if you were somehow able to link these too. Like you were still writing a letter, but more personally towards meth.
 
i loved them both... great work :)

just remember... what you ask for is what you want, and what you want is what defines you... i think you've learnt that now... be careful when you start to plan for what you really want.
 
thanks guys - im not entirely sure wat u mean echo, but i know i want to get off drugs if thats wat u mean
and baker - thats a topping idea....ill give it a go, although i hav written many bitter poems to meth
 
baker - i have written a poem specially for you, where i have joined the two as best as i can - try reading my poem 'Deceit' :)
 
sorry 'Baker' - the new ones got deleted, i posted on here too much today....my bad....im still learning how this forum works (sorry again wordsy)
u can read the new one tomorrow maybe!
 
this is them fused together: (i hope its ok to add this poem here - if not delete it and im sorry mods)

DECEIT
You told me that you would make me thin
You forgot to say I'd pick holes in my skin
You told me that you would give me power
You forgot to mention my breath would turn sour
You told me that I'd lose my awful neurosis
Instead it grew worse and turned into psychosis
You didn't say spiders or bad, black-cloaked men
Or that I'd need it again and again
You never said I'd be the type who injects
Or that without you I'd suffer insects
That run up my arms and under my skin
The withdrawals of not using - I really can't win
You nearly killed me but I'll be a winner
Rehabs exist - I don't need to be thinner
I want to be plump again but with a smile
You made my eyes empty - no grin for awhile
You tried to take everything that I had left
And now I warn evryone - don't fuck with meth!
 
^ Yeah, of course that's fine. :) Sorry I had to delete your threads the other day, but dem's da rules.

Your poems send a really powerful message.
 
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