twilight hours

i dont have anything to say other than whats already been said.
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great work
Mella
 
oh my god dreammaker is a hit, some of the stuff you wrote is so cool and original its just unbelievable, it gave me chills reading it , I can actually picture the dreammaker
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sex is the key to the soul~
 
A rather melancholy day and a week of distressing dreams
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Perhaps morrow will be better.
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isn't it amazing how one poem can find meaning in so many different situations? Still a great one Dave!
 
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as do i.
i had forgotten about it. thank you whoever bumped it.
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart."
~~ Helen Keller
 
it's still wonderful. thanks so much
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"The way the sunlight dances across the pieces of this broken dream.
Or the way the pale moon casts out reflections of my soul.
Melancholy metaphors still have no significance here.
All that's heard are the endless echoes of innocence."
that whole stanza just gets me. WoW
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Damn Dakeva... this just makes me miss you!
This still takes my breath.
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i wanna be like dakeva when i grow up......
that was beautiful.....how can one hold perfection? if we had would we keep it, would it serve as some impossible reminder of how much we fail to acheive eprfection....breath taking....
-phil-
[This message has been edited by liquidphil1 (edited 07 November 2001).]
 
yeah . . . thats pulitizer material.
Dave, I am amazed. That was a stunning poem!
Jeff
 
wow...i still remember you sharing your feelings on this when it was written...glad things have come so far since then
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*big fizzy hugs for dave*
 
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