twilight hours

Dakeva

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You sleep tight.
I'll endure this lonely night.
So silently and tranquil
I wait for my new dream to come

Dream Maker answer me this?
Have you ever crafted a dream so completely divine...
So utterly faultless...
So absolutely enchanting ...

That you had to shatter it?
Break it into infinite pieces and pieces of pieces.
So all could catch a piece.
And rejoice in your grandeur.

Or did you shatter it because.
It was your instant of perfection.
And the reflection of never being that again.
Scared you.

I ask you why because here I drift alone.
In the kingdom of your beautiful broken dream.
Somewhere between here.
Somewhere between there.

Set adrift among the pieces of bliss.
Stopping occasionally to peek a look.
Sometimes it's still beautiful here you know.
This place still has its exceptional allure

The way the sunlight dances across the pieces of this broken dream.
Or the way the pale moon casts out reflections of my soul.
Melancholy metaphors still have no significance here.
All that's heard are the endless echoes of innocence.

Or is all thats left deja vu.
A reflection of a splendorous reflection.
Dancing this grand ballet till morning light.
Ever so close, ever so fleading.

Shattered perhaps.
But for tonight here I'll stay.
So silently and tranquil.
Among the pieces of this dream.
 
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i dare to say--your best yet? isnt it odd what things we find inspiration in, and if the world never brought us any sadness, how many heartfelt words would never be expressed...
you're walking a path that many have certainly walked before, and there is something to learn from them
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((((((dakeva))))))
 
dak-this is wonderfully written
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it really touched me. i can relate in so many ways to what you are feeling.
i second fizzy's comment about this being your best!
i miss you man. just know that we are here if you need us
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kim
 
One word best describes this....
DAMN!
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That gets five Colon D's
 
dare i be a broken record, but hun, this is my fav. of all the stuff i've seen thus far..i can't wait to be even more impressed. muah!
 
I've been there, my friend. I hope things come together for you, or among the shattered splinters of your dream you can see the reflection of yourself, and possibly take away, with your pain, a small amount of wisdom or self betterment. Good luck to you. Things can oly get better.
 
Stunned into silence.
I'm looking forward to seeing you again, dakeva... take care of yourself sweetie.
 
Very nice work
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Hey this is really great work, I love to write so if you want to email me more so I can read some I would love it so much!!!
*HUGS&KISSES*
Echo
 
you rock.
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I wasn't shitting you when I said I've always respected you, dak. The mind of an asshole and the soul of a poet...you wear the combination well.
 
Goodness....I'm dayum near speechless after that one Dave...I agree with brownie on this one..5 colon D's, brother....
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{{Dakeva}}
 
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