try

[drea]

ive come to you in imperfection
and i revel in it
ive met you in this quiet rapture
and ive tasted it
we kiss and bite and touch and taste
only in the dark
my wobbled steps
devoid of grace or substance
working thier way over cobbles and blunders
to you
and your heart
a slip and bite and im spent
seems i have to show you the hidden me
when face value redeems itself for a cheaper price
and im worthless
but oh, to live with the pretty me,
wouldnt satify a person like you
and i love it i hate it and i love it
i hate it.
but want you to love it.
when time deems it appropriate
when the thought of me
and daylight
and joy
become one.....
with impatient footsteps
uneven cobbles breaking my path
ill try.
just as i hope you would.
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life is pain, buttercup...anyone who tells you otherwise is selling something.

 

[Nietzche]

Great poem drea!

 

[E-girl]

i always admire your work. your words seem to fall so gracefully into place. thanks for sharing yet another wonderful piece.
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
"There's a part of me, that i forgot to be. Take a look and see, the light still shines in me." ~~ Milk, Inc.

 

[C Divinity]

drea your an awesome writer, i always look forward to reading your posts, thanks

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You gotta be a bad girl in this world to be heard...