triggered by a song

[bisKi]

a longing, a desire
heart-wrenching pain
emotions and feelings
i thought i had buried
in the graveyard of my heart
has risen again

all it took was a fleeting memory
a line from a song
a gift, a picture
i guess when i convinced myself
that all is alright
i've been lying all along

there've been moments
i wished you were here
that you'd see how i'm faring
that i've 'grown up' (in a way)
and on my own two feet

i'd say more but i can't
if i do my eyes will start to moisten
but like how the song goes
sometimes in certain moments
" I wish you were here*"

~ bisKi 7 May 2003 ~


* :: incubus ~ wish you were here

 

[katmeow]

all it took was a fleeting memory
a line from a song
a gift, a picture

I guess the only way you can avoid it is to shut yourself away from the world so none of these reminders ever creep in... but then what kind of life would that be

I like it bisk!

 

[frostyangel]

A songs lyrics can have over a thousand different meanings to many people.. there is a song for every moment in our lives..
so times it's good.. other times it's bad.

This is one of my favorite songs by incubus. The band definitely knows what their talking about.. and I remember when this song first came out it was a bad time in my life, once again your writing the meanings in my life..

Your wonderful person.. not many people can express this emotional interlube of devotion.. and when you snap up that person.. they're going to be amazed by every last note that you put down.. and anyone that was left behind truely is a dum-ass...

*smooches*

 

[raverchik]

:D

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

 

[bisKi]

hey admit it, how many times have you heard a track and go Oh i wish so and so was here

xoxo //J

cheers all

 

[plazma]

Ecin Krow!

Seriously though, nice work bisKi. Definately a poem that 'EVERYONE' can relate to on any number of different levels.

emotions and feelings
i thought i had buried
in the graveyard of my heart

Very very nice lines there.

-plaz out-