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[WarmRushes]

Hey, I don't post here too often . Feeling really empty/sad and just wrote a poem, thought you lot may wanna read it.

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Swigging and coughing
laughing and smoking
crying and joking
falling and dying
loving and lying
the drink seeps through,
my lies and tears
and anxious fears
heart sinks like an anchor
in to the bleak, dark ocean
to the deepest absyss
of this bleak, dark bottle.

running and stumbling
shouting and shaking
laughing and faking
countless reflections
that are meaningless
without taking action
If i can't save my self
then who really can?

meaasuring life in ciggerettes
lost in music and lost in regrets
getting high just to get by
feeling low and wondering why
the answers are there but I can't grasp them
I wish I was a child again.

 

[neverwas]

I wish I was a child again.

i always think if i could go back to being a child again thigns could be different.

i find that my best form of writting comes from a point in me where i need to use writting as an outlet. eg: when im sad or depressed i like to write. thatsoften where best peices come from.

your peice was both descriptive and flows well for a firrst one of yours ive read.

i hope u continue to post in here