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supersonic

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Something is definetly amiss here in the midst of the bliss. I must admit that although I'm rather frantic about your sudden misfortune I couldn't except what you've done. Theres no more relation with inner existence when much has been pressed and applied. I scream and I'd yell for someone to relate the actions that come from inside. They lift and surround me with vicious rift laughter and scream out straight from the sky. I live and I'll dance and complete all my missions just to watch me fall crash and die. It doesn't do much but it gives me acceptance of things and the way they should be. One day it'll work I'll lift up my head and suddenly race to be free.
 
u said u want answers even to tell ya the bad stuff
well........... i love wat u write but i think it wud be easier and more effective if u wrote ur lines in verse hope u understand wat i mean cos like this one rhymes and i think it wud be better and easier to take in if each thought/sentence had a seperate line just my thoughts hope ur not upset babe cos i do luv the words
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me
 
no offense taken what so ever. Yeah, when I write things down it sorta just spurts out and keeps going, so I don't stop to think about the structure, but noted. And the way it comes out when I do try to structure it on bluelight is kinda odd, sometimes the post has a mind of its own. I guess I'm just a lazy ass.
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Thanks for the reply
 
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