Tourture!

[alykitty]

This is what I meant,
When I said you were killing me,
I'm tormented by my own insanity,
Over you.

I am so tired

Of hurting,
Of crying,
Of longing,


Of this trying that insists,

Of waiting,
Of aching,
Of wanting,



Of this need that persists,

To have you deep inside,

To be at your mercy,

To plead with you to ride,

As I'm whimpering out your name,
Forgetting to breathe,
Hoping you won't leave,


Of feeling like I have no other choice,

Except to be scorched by your fire,
Like a moth to a flame,
Not being able to resist

 

[cherub]

Dayum Carlos needs to give up the bootie

SEXY!!!!!
that is my girl!

 

[RareForm]

Like a moth to a flame,
Not being able to resist

eh! i really liked this part the best, great write aly(sissy), it's very....libidinous..



~Drew

Note:

 

[FixXxer]

wow..
im kinda in a situation where i want a girl so bad it hurts..
and i dont know how she feels about it...

this really means alot to me. seeing these words kinda makes things clearer.. in a blurry way

thank you, and keep writing. very good work

 

[doof-kittie]

I'm tormented by my own insanity,

I really loved this piece. So simple, but so full of emotion.

 

[DarkPoet]

The lust maiden strikes again, good stuff Kitty kat .x

 

[ShaDDoW]

Dayum Carlos needs to give up the bootie

Hey now! You know DAMN WELL I'll give it up the second she gets her ass out here!

kitty