Tonight tonight

[Frosty da snowman]

His method is simplicity
Decades spent rewriting thought to one word descriptions
Eat
Sleep
Fuck
Kill
Survive
Life distilled

Imagination a sonar landscape
Navigating by need
Desire dictates a direction

Tonight he walks to sorrow
Tonight his dreams lead to pain
And as he looks up at tonight’s bar his one word
Defeat
And feral attempt to reconnect with what he was

 

[liha]

way good. at first I was like 'fuck that, defeat NEVER.' but then I realized that's what good poetry does.

 

[colicolo]

Nice

 

[skjalff]

So concise and powerful!!! Life distilled... I really want to quote the whole piece as my "favourite bit" )) I liked this a Lot!


skjalff

 

[RareForm]

concise and powerful indeed...

i really liked "And feral attempt to reconnect with what he was"

great write!!

~Drew

 

[KaNdii kiSses]

Very different from what I am used to reading, but most definitly great!

 

[Frosty da snowman]

Thank u. I havn't written my latlke so this was kinda muscle flexing piece. Short and direct

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

^^Good stuff as always my man!