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beanpoophead

beanpoophead

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Saw the picture
saw myself so real
held it in my own
bones, wearing thin
and I couldn’t believe
what my own eyes
saw, through thin slits

so thin now, so perfect
now, not enough now
and even I couldn’t say
that I looked okay
wish I could see that
when I see myself
today, and everyday

im not sick
nope, not ever sick
sick to my bones
watch them bleed
life and make me whole
if only ten more
would go

then id be something
even more than this
and I wish I could stop
obsessing over it
cos obsession turns
to manic expressions
and losing all control

I try so hard
eat so much to be ok
so the world doesn’t
come in and think
what’s wrong with her
not sure how it all fell
one day that

the next day this
and I don’t even think
that it’s enough, yet
ten more to go
to beautiful

away I stroll
to beautiful
 
*hugs*

babe please pm me if you need to talk. i hope you're doin better now. ive been keeping my eye on through what you write and i know you've been up and down alot lately :\

*huggles you*
 
I've read all of your latest pieces though now I've felt like I should tell you how much I appreciate reading them - this one in particular. Great work.
 
^^^

thank you, the encouragement is really, really great. seroiusly whenever i log onto words and see that one of my poems has replies it just makes me feel so damn good about myself.
 
then id be something
even more than this
and I wish I could stop
obsessing over it
cos obsession turns
to manic expressions
and losing all control
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sad but true.

-Again, a STELLAR peice.. i enjoyd the reading, and if ya ever need it ya kno my msn ;) keep on keepin on. :)
 
Girl unfortunately i relate alittle to well to this,, never good enough is a hard thing to get out of your head. Chins up
Hugs
 
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