to a friend

[Chaotic Action Man]

You don’t belong
But you don’t realize
It is because you are too good
Too good to be here
And to good for them

Yet you linger on
Hoping to grow strong
Not having a clue
That you already are

That all the power
You see in the group
Is simply a reflection
Of you off them

Yet you won’t listen
Continue to feel meek
When we are the ones
Who should lie at your feet

And no matter how hard I tell you
And no matter what I say
You would rather not listen
And throw it away.

Seeing you stand there
As sad as you are
All the while not knowing
What life has waiting in store
I feel as a friend I failed you
Because I could not do more

 

[.dR spgeddi]

strange but i fell like youre talking to yourself.
flows well, but perhaps the meaning is to well hidden?

 

[neverwas]

Yet you linger on
Hoping to grow strong
Not having a clue
That you already are

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

well to tell the truth .dR i started writing this about a friend whom i had just come home from having a beer with, listening to her problems etc. we are both in a similar place in our lives right now, and have just gone through similar situations.

you made me go through a second read and your right, i think a lot of me crept in there somehow subconsciously. i'm not sure how i feel about that.

 

[neverwas]

^^^^ i wouldnt be to worried bout the 'urself' creeping into ur writting. if u are going through similar things then it was probly just some familiarisation that crept its way into ur words