Timeless Emotions

[madmick19]

Once a candle burning
now hardly a flickering flame
sitting in this derelict hulk
of memories long forgotten
The pain still exists
Just think of the fun years
and memories to boot
life is such a worry at times
like a burning candle
Will it burn Brightly the whole time
and hardly ever flicker?
Will it flicker for half the time and then sadly wither
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the consciouness of self is the greatest hinderance to the correct execution of any physical action... u dont exist therefore there are no boundaries or limits

 

[E-girl]

i really liked the ending.
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
"...there are 2 paths, you can go back, but in the long run... there's still time to change the road you're on..."

 

[mirabii]

Nice work there mick. I love how it ends in suspense - you just can't help but feel like pondering it!