Thoughts on Words and Communication (short)

[Dandy]

Words are competent enough to eradicate,
what we call each other conclusively becomes –
what we think of each other,
and it matters.
Listening, (not echoing), -
may be the most devout form of acclaim.
Communication is to our relationship(s) –
What breathing is to maintaining life.
It is also power, and those who have –
Conquered its compelling use can alternate
their own experience of the world,
and the world’s experience of them.

The End.


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[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Originally posted by Dandy
Words are competent enough to eradicate,
what we call each other conclusively becomes –
what we think of each other,
and it matters.

^Just amazing. I love the rhythm in this piece, and the intricate, very pretty picture it paints for me.
I re-read this a lot.

Beautiful, sweetheart.

 

[cherub]

so reminds me of how or maybe a reminder of how we should view our lives. Great stuff

 

[katmeow]

what we call each other conclusively becomes –
what we think of each other,
***
Listening, (not echoing), -
may be the most devout form of acclaim.

I also agree with the power those who hold a mastery of words can have.

Nice work, I really enjoyed reading this piece!

 

[neverwas]

thats all i got to say...your an inspirational writter

 

[Dandy]

Thank-You for all the wonderful compliments.