this

[TiberCross]

could you channel this idea
for some greater purpose
make it sound smart or funny
or cool
make me feel like i deserve this
this
this nothing which are these words
these wrongs which are these songs
this limitless nonpower
this malcontent hour that draws nearer
with nothing in the way
no words that can say
no heads that can bow to stop it through pray
this is the day the weather will and all that
remains
will be a few words caught in the water and you the slave

 

[faithfully dangerous]

most of the stuff in this forum is dry and juvenile. most of it lacks passion. most of it reminds me of someone struggling with words and feelings and emotions.

this is beautiful. very few pieces catch my eye in this forum anymore. i had no idea you were such a lovely writer!

 

[LostProphecy]

Dude, if I were a girl I'd.......

 

[faithfully dangerous]

^if you were a girl you'd let the writer of this throw you down and have his way with you?

 

[LostProphecy]

^Tibercross has been a good friend of mine for many many years. In otherwords, yeah.

 

[Pantomime7]

I would seriously ......... if I was a chick..........Lol.

This write is pimp.........
Mad Props!

 

[jaymie]

damn, that was a hearty bowl of words. proper and passionate work.

 

[mariacallas]

oOooOh you hit the oft-missed spot in my heart whenever i read most of the poetry here boy superb!