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this new love of mine....

dope_sick_girl

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the slow, sexy way your warmth covers me, the way you make everything alright, the pure emotion you give me, the way i want you every night. you are for me what i never knew was missing, everything i never knew i wanted, the whisper in my ear when i wasn't listening, an idea perhaps, that wasn't yet implanted. you take me over, make me yours, give me pleasure, for hours and hours. when will i walk away from the torture on the horizon, realize the long term effects, everything bad, if this goes on. when will i see what's been covered up with the ecstasy you provide me with? perhaps never, the perfect drug, is just a perfect myth. i know what is right, but i don't want to believe, don't want my perfect world to crash, as i say "no more smack for me.". i wish i knew that this were not false, but i think i will love it as long as i have a pulse.
 
For some of us, our chemical romances are very dear. I'm not saying it's good to be shooting shit, but still in all honesty, I doubt I'll ever stop for good because I don't want to ever say never again.
 
very well written and stays true to your style, your pieces almost read as one series. Great stuff! but, if you dont mind me saying, drugs seem like somewhat of a dull topic to me these days, just kinda predictable.. or may be not, but i have a hard time emotionally reacting to this particular piece, though i understand you and can, on some level, relate.. anyways, thats my personal strange quirks ;) like i said earlier - I loved the writing.



gene
 
^something along these lines.

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