This may sound

[Furnace]

kinda twisted but
I
find something
deeply erotic
about being killed
by a woman
who I've done wrong,
and
the only way
for her
to get any kind of
closure
is
to kill me.
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inspired by a willing muse...

 

[shannabanana]

oh my god

 

[Capt. ChickenBone]

no I don't find it any more twisted than any other S&M type fanatasy I've come across.
As a poem, though, I'd have to say it doesn't have much merit aside from its weird subject matter.

 

[mashead testing]

Nuffin wrong with that, each to their own!

 

[cheeno]

Sorta James Bond Badgirl Stylee. A dangerous woman is always erotic.
/me puts on best Sean Connery impression:
'what I did last night I assure you was for king and country, I derived no pleasure from it whatsoever.'

 

[rm-rf]

sounds like a slayer song, sorta
i loved it, thx!

 

[Angelight]

interesting.